Rajesh looked at the smoke rising out of the
local train and quickly took out his white handkerchief from his pocket and
covered his nose. He saw the platform overcrowded as usual and thought for a
while about how he would enter the train without someone trampling on one of
his feet. The train came to a halt and there was a huge commotion all of a
sudden with everyone running towards the open door to get in quickly before the
train starts again. With his laptop bag firmly in one hand and another on his
back pocket protecting his valet, Rajesh ran as fast as he could to catch the
train. He removed the hand covering his valet and caught hold of the steel rod
at the center of the door when three others pushed him into the train. Rajesh
was inside and he breathed a sigh of relief. He started looking at his watch
and the number of stops on the display when a pungent smell struck his nostrils.
He wanted to take his handkerchief and cover
his nose again, but he was unable to get his hand to his pocket. One hand was
struggling to hold the iron rod on one of the seats for balance and the he was
unable to move the other one, holding his laptop was sandwiched between two men.
He was unable to breathe properly and continued sniffing at his co passengers
who were oblivious to his discomfort. The smell continued to get on his nerves
and he wondered why people have to be in so much hurry that they could even
smell horrible. He looked at the three men he was surrounded with, sweat
patches visible on their shirts, holding the rods over their head. As the train
took a turn he fell on to one of them. He balanced himself and asked, “What’s
the smell, boss?” His passenger was an indignant, pudgy middle-aged man who
hurled some abuse about white collar people and their stupidity. While leaving
the train, he trampled on Rajesh’s foot for good measure. Rajesh cursed and
with his hand freed, took out his kerchief and covered his nose.
He stepped out of the train, walked towards
his office and sat down in his chair breathing heavily for the effort. He found
the air still carrying the bitterness of the local train and called the
building maintenance services and asked them to switch on the air conditioning.
He sat there feeling the cool air on his body for a bit, but still could not
shake off the unease. He looked around and glanced surreptitiously towards his
colleague in the next cabin. He was typing something on his desktop and was
smiling within himself. Rajesh tried to see if there were any sweat patches on
his shirt and if they were the source of his distress. When he found nothing,
he went to his colleague’s desk and asked him “Do you find something wrong in
the office today? It smells horrible. What’s the smell, boss?”. The colleague
gave him a pat on the back and said, “I think you should take a break. I don’t
smell anything funny.”
Rajesh had a coffee but that did nothing to
brighten his mood. He could not concentrate on the job at hand and he found
himself sniffing at everyone who met him. He earned a lot of snares as he
wondered why did everyone smell so bad that day. It was as if everyone thought
not to take a bath as a protest against something and he was the only one sane
enough not to take such oaths. Wherever he went, the smell never left him. He
got obsessed with finding its root and checked the dustbins to see if there was
a dead rat or a stale pizza that was causing it. But he found no answers and
his head started to ache. He messaged his boss that he would be taking the day
off.
The thought of the journey back in the local
train depressed him. He could not imagine an hour of that ordeal and ordered a
cab to take him home. He slept on the journey back home in the cab with his
kerchief tied tightly to his nose. His wife should be at home and may be they
could catch a movie and lunch to utilize this free time.
Rajesh knocked on his door and his wife,
Sandhya opened it for him. He got in quickly and removed the kerchief off his
nose and breathed air in. She gave him a weird look as he came towards her. He
tried to hug her, and she distanced herself from him. Rajesh looked bewildered
and found that its that damn smell again. Even his wife? What was this? Some
sort of conspiracy to play on his senses?
Sandhya came towards him and asked “What’s
that smell, boss? And why are you wearing that shirt when I took out a freshly
washed one for you to wear. Why don’t you go and have a shower. Gosh. You smell
terrible. How the guys at your office bore you? “
Rajesh quickly went into the bathroom without
a word.
This post is written as a part of Close Encounters of the Smelly Kind hosted by IndiBlogger
One of a kind, unique twist to the tale. Very smelly indeed. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and liking Rio
DeleteAccept the foolish thoughts that went through in my mind. The terrible smell due to unwashed clothes was the best part of the story.
ReplyDeletewhat are those thoughts?
DeleteFirst I thought that the three guys were theifs and tried to steal his wallet. Then that they brought some sort of chloroform with them which smelled ugly. Once I got to know that all people smelled alike for him. I understood that there was something in his bag that smelt bad. But I didn't expect it was due to the unwashed clothes.
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DeleteNice post... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading :)
DeleteLOL....this was nice :D
ReplyDeleteThanks FP
DeleteJust stumbled upon your blog thro' blogadda. Nice one.. :) loved the twist.. carried out well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Priya for reading and liking
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