Sniff. Breathe in. Exhale. Peep through. Mutter. Curse. Peep through. Shift of stance. Look of discomfort. Whimper. Another mutter. Discomfort. Helplessness. Pursing of Throat. Sound. Voice. Clear. Confession.
“Father I’m not a virgin.”
Response. Intent. Composed. Correct.
“Who is?”
Sigh. Loud. Relief. Liberation.
Footsteps. Running.
Moving away. Free. Uninhibited.
Truth.
Echo. “Who is?” Question Mark.
This post is written as a response to Indispire Topic "Virginity should not be regarded as a girl's character certificate according to me. What's your take?"
Powerful writing I must say..
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DeleteConfession-Time is a great idea, NSV :)
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DeleteReally strong message. :)
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DeleteFresh. Innovative. Striking. "True!"
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DeleteIn a dreary society where the realm of virginity is ascribed with everything from stereotypes to aplomb, you put your message in a succinct and extremely condescending way. :)
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